2017年12月大学英语六级满分作文精讲:你喜欢健康还是财富 更新日期:2017-10-22 爱语吧编辑:爱语吧

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 Health and Wealth, Which Do You Prefer?
  "Health is wealth!". This is an old saying which the majority applaud. As a rule, the wealthier you are, the weaker is your health, but this cannot be applied to all.
  To begin with, a person that has health can afford to challenge all hardships. For example, manual workers are usually stout and energetic. With their energy, they earn their living. Although such an occupation brings little reward as compared with the energy they have exerted, they enjoy life whatever things may be.
  Moreover, business is based on health. Students in good health can absorb knowledge more readily. In good health, scientists can tackle complex technical problems and achieve more success.
  Frequently we find millionaires cling close to their doctors for they seldom have enough exercises to bring forth better health. Their lack of exercises slackens the readiness of growth of the antibodies to resist the at tack of diseases. So, my argue is that health is more important than wealth for if we do not have health, what can we benefit from wealth?


  CET6六级作文结构分析:
  ·Health is wealth
  * More wealth, weaker health
  ·Good health can afford to challenge all hardships, e.g.
  * Manual workers
  * Businessmen
  * Students
  * Scientists
  * Millionaires lack health
  ·Conclusion
  No health, no wealth


  CET6六级作文内容分析:
  本文是一篇议论文, 文中作者的观点鲜明, 全文均围绕这一观点展开, 每段的第一都是主题句, 结论句与第一句呼应, 这种首尾呼应的写作技巧很值得学习。
  CET6六级作文万能句型:
  applaud v. 赞同
  cannot be applied to all 并不适用于所有人
  hardship n. 困难
  manual worker 体力劳动者
  stout and energetic 健壮而精力充沛
  earn their living 谋生
  occupation n. 职业
  the energy they have exerted 所出的力
  absorb v. 吸收
  tackle v. 解决, 处理
  cling close to their doctors 总离不开医生
  slackens the readiness of growth of the antibodies 放松体内增长抗体的准备

 

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